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Elly's avatar

Well done! I especially loved the ending!

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Jackie Dana's avatar

Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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Pennie R. S. Nelson's avatar

Lol that was good.

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Winston Malone's avatar

Loved this!!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Fun story. I like the ending.

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Jackie Dana's avatar

Thank you! It is a very rare thing... I came up with the ending on the spot rather than agonizing over it for days!

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Mark Starlin's avatar

Just like music, often the “first take” is the best. 🤓

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Mark's avatar

Never would have guessed!

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Bill Adler's avatar

I loved this.

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Jackie Dana's avatar

Aww, thanks!

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Vee Kant's avatar

Nice. Good ending.

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The Story Birds's avatar

Ha ha you got me! That was fun.

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Jackie Dana's avatar

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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