Quite brave to start outwith the arrival of the monster - if this were a movie intro i would be sitting with my popcorn anticipating thar this would turn out to be a dream sequence that would somehow shape the main story. Cue a sudden cutaway to s suburban mum doing suburban mum things or something like that. The tension builds nicely and the detail paints a really clear picture of the beastie.
I'm so glad it helped a bit!
Quite brave to start outwith the arrival of the monster - if this were a movie intro i would be sitting with my popcorn anticipating thar this would turn out to be a dream sequence that would somehow shape the main story. Cue a sudden cutaway to s suburban mum doing suburban mum things or something like that. The tension builds nicely and the detail paints a really clear picture of the beastie.
Enjoyed reading your comments, Jackie. I think you should consider following through with your "monster" stories. Hope you keep up the good work.
Rob in Yautepec
Abandoned brewery tunnels? Neat.
Welcome back! Looks like you had some productive time figuring some things out. That's always good too.