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This was great! I wish we could have stayed in the 40s a bit more but oh well.

I’m enjoying this crazy story and I’m looking forward to making it a bit crazier next week!

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Groovy chapter, Jackie! I like that we’re leaping through time now.

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Jul 2, 2022Liked by Jackie Dana

Really enjoyed the self-described "cheesy gumshoe detective novel" of this ongoing multiple-author endeavor! The depth and suspense that is created in each new chapter makes this a much anticipated read each week!

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Joey is having a crazy week. And it just keeps getting more confusing. Poor Joey. 🤣

I could have written a 1970s chapter from memory. Maybe Joey will start acting like Columbo now. 🤣

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Still loving this challenge. It all flows so much better than I ever would have expected while still having a nice signature touch from each writer. Can't wait for more!

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This is marvelous.

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Late commenting but had to say I loved how you went meta with the found novel! And such a seamless transition on the time travel with plenty of great details before and after, such as the victory curls and the picket signs. Nice job, Jackie!

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