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V.L. Augustin's avatar

> But the ball returned, trapping him in a dead space as it rebounded against the bumpers near him, a deafening bing-bing-bing-bing bumper frenzy.

You've certainly made being trapped in a pinball machine terrifying!

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Geoffrey Golden's avatar

Great worldbuilding and pinball specifics. I had a lot of fun reading this. And I recently played Captain Fantastic!

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