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Pennie R. S. Nelson's avatar

I love It! It kept my interest the whole time. Great story.

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Jackie Dana's avatar

Oh awesome, that’s great to hear.

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Geoffrey Golden's avatar

I thought it was a good ending! There were consequences to her actions, but she was also working within a bad system.

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Jackie Dana's avatar

Cool. It wasn’t a story I had intended to write but since I dreamed half of it, I felt like I had to complete it and I just wasn’t sure if I hit the mark or not.

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Reina Cruz's avatar

Great last line. I like that twist of humor

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Jackie Dana's avatar

Thanks!

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wallobooks.org's avatar

Great story! I run a Not-For-Profit. We work with children in adversity, giving them access to magical storybooks to help them connect with the world. We would love to publish your story in our tiny little book. It will be great to hear from you. You can reach me out at swastika@wallobooks.org

Regards,

Swastika.

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