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I love It! It kept my interest the whole time. Great story.

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I thought it was a good ending! There were consequences to her actions, but she was also working within a bad system.

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Great last line. I like that twist of humor

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Great story! I run a Not-For-Profit. We work with children in adversity, giving them access to magical storybooks to help them connect with the world. We would love to publish your story in our tiny little book. It will be great to hear from you. You can reach me out at swastika@wallobooks.org

Regards,

Swastika.

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