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deletedMay 3, 2022Liked by Jackie Dana
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deletedMay 3, 2022Liked by Jackie Dana
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Well done! I’ve participated in those types of contests before and the lack of sleep always gets to me.

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This is great! It's amazing what we can come up with under pressure. At those times I never feel great about what I'm writing, but when I look at it later, I'm usually surprised at how good the story is.

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Great story! Fun concept and vivid characters :-)

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You had me at "super-duper". :-)

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Loved this! It sounds like the start of a novel. I want to know what happens next as I’m pretty sure something is going to!

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